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作业1

Some people take their family when they work abroad for a period of time. Does this have more advantages than disadvantages forindividuals and their family?
Para 1. Introduction: Background + Thesis statement

Para 2. ldea 1: Topic sentence 1 + Supporting evidences

Para 3. ldea 2: Topic sentence 2 + Supporting evidences

Para 4. Conclusion: Summary + lmplication

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para2：

	Taking family members abroad might caues them uncomfotable with the new environment. Living abroad means departing with the familar hometown, leaving all the friends and other relatives, giving up former jobs  and starting a toally unpredictable new life. So it's easy for other family members to feel disconnected and uneasy to go with you to live in a new country without a solid social network.

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Introduction:

1. Hook-> Background->Thesis statement
1. Consise but effective! 

例子：

	As humans celebrate the new year, most areunaware that nearly all polar bears will vanish by2050 due to global warming (Bernish,2015). 
	With polar ice melting at alarmingrates, bears are starving and drowningas scientists search for ways toprevent their extinction. 
	In order for polarbears to survive,humans must reduceglobal warming byconservingenergy and reducinggreenhouse gases..

Case 2 :

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Boby paragraph：

​ Topic sentence-> Evidence-> Analysis->Transition (Transition is needed but its position is flexible )

U should also think about the rebutal

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Paraphase:

使用一些高级的词，比如用paramount merit代替biggest advantages